The Relief

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We think everything will be ok,

We think everything will be over one day,

Yet we forgot to think about everything,

As the journey gets longer under the sun,

And the clock ticks gently through the time,

We forgets to think who we really are,

And we believes in something,

Lies covered in hatred and ego,

And the pain weights out of pride,

Always Everyday and each moment,

When the scars gets deeper and darker,

And we wish to scream like ghosts,

As we go dwell in between things,

Inducing wellness in to the fatigue,

And each day will appear like another liability,

As we forgot living the god  blessed life,

The chaos will fill our mind’s voids ,

Like the lamb black smudging over glass,

We will start hating the ghost of  our pasts,

As it follow us and byte like snakes,

And soon the dawn will be dark,

The evenings will be silent and cloudy,

And where should the faith remain ?

Where should the hope survive ?

Or is it just life?

Why does the dear god condemn on  us ?

When he promised us love and mercy,

Our minds sinks in to questions,

Question with no answers to tell,

And we have answers within our minds,

With no queries  to assume,

Time is the only answer,

Hope is the only relief…

22 thoughts on “The Relief

    halfwaybetweenthegutter said:
    March 22, 2012 at 2:22 AM

    “And each day will appear like another liability” – brilliant line, I really can relate to this.

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    Colourfade responded:
    March 22, 2012 at 7:16 AM

    hi,thank you…

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    booguloo said:
    March 22, 2012 at 8:13 AM

    You ask a lot of tormented questions I hope you find your answers in your travels.

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      Colourfade responded:
      March 22, 2012 at 7:35 PM

      I hope one day i will find them.🙂

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    pure2core said:
    March 22, 2012 at 12:34 PM

    Hey! that’s superb…I Really got stuck into the words.. amazing lines..Thanks for share

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      Colourfade responded:
      March 22, 2012 at 7:36 PM

      🙂 thank you very much pure2core.

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    evilnymphstuff said:
    March 22, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    Wow this poem is so beautiful and powerful🙂

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    ashbeezone said:
    March 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
    Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

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    some of my Haiku Collections
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    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2012/03/22/my-silly-shitty-hovering-mind-from-darkness-to-sunshine/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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    Time Love Journey said:
    March 24, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    Life is like a larva, the one hatches to a beautiful butterfly as time passes
    the butterfly who flies to see the world in new dimensions…
    only the thing needed is hope and and faith…🙂

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      Colourfade responded:
      March 24, 2012 at 8:29 PM

      🙂 faith…oldest of the words i love…
      hope…new word still to learn.

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    Jennifaye said:
    March 25, 2012 at 10:25 AM

    “Time is the only answer, Hope is the only relief…” — I can relate to this. Never give up; hope springs eternal.

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      Colourfade responded:
      March 25, 2012 at 8:31 PM

      I wont give up,I hope the time wont give up me…

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    magher1 said:
    March 28, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    Yeah maybe one day the relief will come… These are difficult questions, but sometimes it’s just better not to know every single thing… Tense!

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      Colourfade responded:
      March 29, 2012 at 12:25 AM

      You are right magheri :)…like people say…half to god,the other half i handle…

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    ammie22 said:
    March 29, 2012 at 4:46 AM

    This is a great piece. You will find the answers you seek, if you continue to press for them! May God bless you on your journey!

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      Colourfade responded:
      October 12, 2012 at 1:32 AM

      ammie, Thank you…god bless you too. sorry for being late.

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    Asifa Zunaidha said:
    May 27, 2012 at 6:19 PM

    Time is indeed the only answer🙂

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    abichica said:
    May 30, 2012 at 8:12 PM

    beautiful poem!!🙂

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