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Today I remember those days,

The days just went away like splattered rain drops,

I remember those moments that I never recognized,

And right now I don’t have words,

The words to express what I am feeling.

I know I am not broken,

I know I am not alone today,

But I don’t know what I am feeling,

Everything got reasons and is for good reasons,

My mother always says and may be right she is,

Everything happens have reasons,

And sometimes those reasons point us destinies.

Today I have hope,

Today I have some dreams to see,

But I am missing the reason which made me dream and hope,

The reason which made me good from evil,

The reason which inspired me to live.

I am not weakened,

Because I have promises to keep,

And debts which can only repaid by time,

Life has taught me how to walk alone,

That how to be good myself in the middle of all peril,

I have started to believe the corridor I followed was right,

And is the best one for me,

Maintaining the voids around me,

I must go ahead,

Choosing the right path from the cross road I am standing,

And now I have realized my goals,

That our goals are important than our dreams,

I don’t know to where life will lead me,

May be I have to lose in my way,

But I know I won’t give up my fight this time,

That to dare is the way to kill my fears,

Keeping the smile in my heart,

I will go ahead …


32 thoughts on “Today

    namith said:
    June 16, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    Nice to read it because I know what inspired you to write this….
    Keep posting stuff like these…

    You have got talent…
    Show it to the world.


    Colourfade responded:
    June 17, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    Thank you sir,words are beautiful when it comes from heart…


    tigerbrite said:
    June 17, 2011 at 8:18 PM

    I enjoyed your poem. Good philosophy.


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 10:33 PM

      just some positive thoughts. 🙂


    tinkerbel1987 said:
    June 18, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    Powerfully 🙂


    Judith Evans said:
    June 18, 2011 at 1:40 AM

    “The days just went away like splattered raindrops”…love this evocative line. Your poem is a testament to resilience and determination. Well done!


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 10:32 PM

      judth,thank you.
      you are right,sometimes we have take our own stands and stay strong.


    Jingle said:
    June 18, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    yeah, go ahead.

    well done.



      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 10:29 PM

      thank you people gives me lot of encouragement.


    meiro said:
    June 18, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    Emjoy reading your work.
    Best wishes.


    brokenpenwriter said:
    June 18, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    “I know I am not broken…” This line revealed so much in its simplicity – difficulties and tragedies suffered yet survived; Tests upon your will gave you a chance to prove that your attitude is good and willing – an attitude that recognizes these trials are but swords being tempered and strengthened by the fire, making them more skilled and beautiful in the process. Lovely work.


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 10:27 PM

      thank you, ln life if we start crying there will always be reasons to do so,but a smile can give us hope,dare to move forward.
      during ww2,allies got omaha beach not because of fire power but will power.


    magher1 said:
    June 18, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    I also believe that everything happens for a reason… I like the positive ending! Don’t worry, new reasons will soon come 😉


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 11:14 PM

      🙂 recently i asked one of my friends what is the best thing in life,she replied it is hope…Right she is.


    tasithoughts said:
    June 18, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    You project the positive in things and its power.



    mindlovemisery said:
    June 18, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Keep the positive outlook not knowing searching for the answers is what makes like interesting, its the journey that’s the fun part


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 11:02 PM

      i dont believe in probablity,the answers will arrive when we go ahead in life.hope is the best thing in life.


    aj said:
    June 18, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    nic work. a gret change from black to white.


      Colourfade responded:
      June 18, 2011 at 11:16 PM

      aj,thank you.
      it was not black and white,may be i just asumed black and white.


    swanrose said:
    June 19, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    this was a good read and very enjoyable. thank you happy rally


    Dr Madan Goyal said:
    June 19, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    Enlightening indeed! Keep it up.


    seabell said:
    June 20, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    A philosophy of life! A good one, I think!


      Colourfade responded:
      June 20, 2011 at 3:00 AM

      a breakthrough in some philosophies


    Dakshi said:
    June 21, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    Wonderful Read……


    Peggy Nolan said:
    June 22, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    Well done!


      Colourfade responded:
      June 22, 2011 at 2:13 AM

      Dakshi and peggy,thank you both.


    brokenpenwriter said:
    July 3, 2011 at 11:09 PM

    “Maybe I have to lose in my way”

    The light of wisdom shines through this line – how can we find our inner selves and that quiet voice inside if we don’t first get lost? A few years ago I was blindfolded for four hours and taken to a place – I didn’t know where. I had to trust another person to lead me around and suddenly all my senses were heightened. I heard people approaching from quite a distance and discovered I could tell if they were man or woman before they even spoke; I missed being a part of the “seeing” world and felt as if someone had placed a wall there, shutting me out. I hung onto the voice of my companion as a drowning person grips the cast rope. Eventually I learned to listen to the voice inside, and to trust it. I had to be blinded before I could “see.” It sounds like you have learned much already on your journey, being good in the middle of all peril is a true test of your inner strength – bless you and keep walking. You have a beautiful spirit.


    Colourfade responded:
    July 4, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    let me thank first for reading my poetry,I believe everyone graduates on the subject “life” in their ways.i hope i have learned something,each day has a lesson to teach.i believe its better to believe in our self first.when we are alone we find little things in life and minor details.we later will learn how to smile and how to deal thing well.though i am not too good,i believe i am better in some ways.


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